Final critique for my Flash animation was helpful for me today. Everyone in my critique group liked my animation, but felt that I needed to include more clips of the accident scenes as I only has 2 scenes where the accident happens, and the rest were just the statistic of the accident that happens. I am going to add more clips of people involved in the accident such as someone sticking their fingers together with glue and another where the character cuts his finger with the knife. This will take time to do but I feel that it will improve my final animation and give it more of a awareness/ warning video feel.